Bookkeeping: Lynch

[clarentine]

So far, that plot outline I came up with at the start of this project is not helping much. I know the direction I want to move the narrative, but the level of conflict is not as high as I'd like and the characters are behaving more like cats (as in, herding them in a particular direction is a major challenge). Still, we're making progress. I was able to lay down the bones of some foreshadowing without an infodump.

New words: 527

Total words: 6105

Mean things: Claws in your chest; feeling picked upon for coming down out of the hills.

Research: zilch